WWW: Used the house colours so it's obvious it is a Plantsbrook School magazine. They look excited in the main image so they will be drawn in to read the magazine.
EBI: The coverlines were a different colour so that it is easier to read. More coverlines as they aren't a lot
WWW- the image draws attention to the reader. WWW- The Masthead stands out EBI- The headings are not clear maybe change the font or colour EBI- The white shaded block ruins the image.
WOW Chelsea! Looks really professional i love the way the guy on the rights facial expression, gives off a really good impression of the students in school!, Maybe you could section the text out a bit more??, cant wait to see the improvements, Really Excited!
WWW:
ReplyDeleteUsed the house colours so it's obvious it is a Plantsbrook School magazine.
They look excited in the main image so they will be drawn in to read the magazine.
EBI:
The coverlines were a different colour so that it is easier to read.
More coverlines as they aren't a lot
WWW- the image draws attention to the reader.
ReplyDeleteWWW- The Masthead stands out
EBI- The headings are not clear maybe change the font or colour
EBI- The white shaded block ruins the image.
WOW Chelsea! Looks really professional i love the way the guy on the rights facial expression, gives off a really good impression of the students in school!, Maybe you could section the text out a bit more??, cant wait to see the improvements, Really Excited!
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